So ..... i say the bad thinks ... i think it's stolen, it#s you second game you post here , by your first game people have add the link to the stolen game in the comments, and this game whoud take quit a bit of programming. Then there is are some credits that don't realy appeal to a guy whos second game this shoud be..... so i wont look it up but i thin the posebility is realy high.
Ah and it needs a bigger ring so you choud actually manover.
ok you need some thinks ^^ a t first some text that explanins how the game works. Like thats a 2 player game what the controls are and that stuff.
Then you need a Game ^^ sorry to say but it comes down to who is flying at the end at the front. so 90% of the game you don't need to do annything.
why people summit unfinisched games...
ok the Hp can go to -xxx, the monsters get hard to quick so you can#t keep up with you hp, the Hp don't regen so loosing more than 40 a fight is a shure loose, the grafiks has it's own stile (bad), the introduktion picture hase nochting to do with the game.
1/5 ........ ok 2/5 still it's not a dress up or Shootorial game
hmm wha we all played Mario cart ? because of the 3d raicing and the balloon battle mode ..... in both the game laks not only a bit. mostly you must memorise the traks so you can get good times because you can't forsee what comes next, and th weapons are a bit booring.
Ah as the rest sad change the music oop :) at first it's ok abut after some time it's changing into a fun killin to hear it over and over again.
perhaps you make him follow a bit slower so the get to see him more from the side, but as grafik it looks like a nice stile. Perhaps a bite on mouse button press ^^
So as i understand the game ^^
Its a Turn Based fighting game using grafics from wow. You clik on attack od magig skills from your chars and fight so aganst the enemy. When you win the game is over what is disaponting because the RPG Theme lets you think you get exp for leveling up and gold for buying equipment. Althou some story whoud be good and not that mutsh stolen grafics from WOW, i know that good grafics are pretty hard to do for yourself but when you steal from WOW get the komplete WOW Theme with a story that plays in WOW and the norman HP/Mana System.
It's a bit easy because i win withoutt knowing what the skills do ^^
Hey not bad for the first try, it hase a sond off musik off button thats works, 2 nice "bosses" 1 comes all the time 1 comes only a bit in the game and less often.
The healing is a bit glitshy because it sometimes don't work, but the controlls fell good.
So i hope to see more from you.
Get some Statistiks to the player how Strong the balls are what he is buying how many balls he have.
Perhaps some other things t do like upgrads for the factory or a defender ball tat can only move around the Factory and is player controlled.
not bad for the beginning.
Work to do: Find something to interact with you balls so you can send then on gather / defend / attack / patroll perhaps with an indirect tool like Populus.
Find a way so the player don't die by dumbnass of his balls wehn they don't mine or get hassrsd to erly, like some white balls in the middle that must be killed befor a wall goes down, so the rotinge get time to set up mining routs.
The raise the first chash, players whant to see fights not waiting for 10 min till the first bigger fights emergy other tham my big ball is killing his smaller ones while his big ball is killing my smaer ones.
Perhaps some sotr of bonus places wehre balls get bigger while they stand on it.
A health meter on balls, choub be the sice so they get smaler when they fight so you can see who will win a fight.
Realy not bad. perhaps the Zpgrade screen chout tell you what the upgrades do, and the background choud change a bit the ohter things other Commentators have already sad.
Sorry for you when you say " I suck at making games but I tried ", but thats wrong, you didn't try.
You only need something to uploade to get some " oh i have a D at my name , look all in chat i am cool "
Spare us with this crap, this is at last a game uploading side, so when you try to make a game upload it in it's final stage, the erly uploads are ok for 6-12 year old, but you sad in your Profile you are 20 Years so get a book to read how to Programm and quit whining.
nice top down scroller.
BUT:
The Shield Upgrade is to powerfull, it needs a recharge time so you can 't use it unlimitet to have a invincibel cheat in the game.
There is to less upgrades to buy, i got everything and had 3 missions to go.
The endboss needs some buffs, he went down like nothing when you activate all you 4 extras, and he schoud be the final boss where you need to use everything, so i didn't even see how i have to dodge the bullets because he dies quiker then my ship when i only activate 1 shield.
So ok i checked it ... it#s game upload 15 for you, and the rest aren't annything better. So it#s not your first game and you knowed that this is a Game upload side. You jst whant to get some nice Uploder Levels right ?
So say to all in chat i am a game maker and you are not so i am right and you are wrong.
Ok the Thing you Uploaded is crap not even a game and a 6 year old whoud have done it better.
The 6 Year old whoud have put some hart in it and make at lease a nice part with more than 2 types of trees and some more ways to walk around, because the 6 year old whoud whant people to at lease like it a bit.
you only upload some 10 min click around with some random trees and a ramdom music.
Reals i have seen Mincraft servers of 6 year old's that look mutsh better and had realy nice build housen and parks.
not the badest Game , the shooting part is ok, but you need to get some power ups in the game and a upgrade shop. The other thing is that you either get some animations in the picture of the pilot or just completely give it up. Perhaps Programm a chosing screen wherer you can choose from 3 differernt Pilots.
Woha a cool Sidecrolling shooter with upgrades waves and turrets. You can't get realy more in the game and everything works.
For my tase the main weapons become a bit powerless in realy late game and upgrads cost as mutsh as 15.000 points. But in sich games there shoud be a borer where the game stops you from playing through in the first try ^^
ok not a bad game, it's quite fun, bur perhaps a rename to moon race ot moon laberint whoud be better in a " WAR " game you whant to shoot at an enemy or fight enemys not race aganst the time.
ok i get in one line with Ryjoerynox even when some people don't like his opinion.
But a game wher you set up turrets and fight with you char to defend an instalation is good as long as you don't have enemys whith spawn at the edge of the screen and are directly in range. So you can't def you instalation aganst then and are only trying to run around at the borders of the map killing there long range monsters and let the turrets take control of the rest.
There choud be some more boost items to be droped in the stages, and the other builindg choud have some reason to to be there, like getting a monter with a cahe and bring it there to convert it on your sinde (1 per wave ) or get some Ressorsen from some other monsters.
the controls are ........ why can't you unit stop when you let the key go ? Later you hav such an high speed that when you see a monster you need to break 1 screen long then turn back only to shoot it.
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