I'm going to put emphasis on critique as this isn't a complete product. Half of the game is spent loading. The ship controls are very slidy and the jumping is unresponsive after you have landed. You haven't shown any fun gameplay mechanics, the obstacles are all rectangles, and there's nothing visually interesting about the levels. I imagine since this is a visual novel, if you were to put emphasis on making the levels visually interesting then it might do better. Personally, if the environment were crafted from procedural raymarched signed distance fields, this would make me much more interested in this product. Good luck nonetheless.
Hi! Thanks a lot for your feedback, critiques are very useful for us to work on weak spots :)
In terms of mechanics, we are working on moving obstacles, explosive track areas and flickering areas. What do you think about it? And what addition would you like to see?
Regarding the jump, the idea is that you can't jump continuously, otherwise you could just jump-fly over holes. How would you improve that? Maybe an animation of the ship bouncing when landing?
Thanks!
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Hi! Thanks a lot for your feedback, critiques are very useful for us to work on weak spots :) In terms of mechanics, we are working on moving obstacles, explosive track areas and flickering areas. What do you think about it? And what addition would you like to see? Regarding the jump, the idea is that you can't jump continuously, otherwise you could just jump-fly over holes. How would you improve that? Maybe an animation of the ship bouncing when landing? Thanks!